I thought the screenplay worked very well. The time I spent reading the screenplay was very enjoyable and an easy read. One thing I liked was the parenthesis they added to the dialogue. If I was an actor, this would help me determine how to approach my lines, to elimate most other possibilites. However, like other, it was if i was reading a novel. From other screen writing classes I have taken, they each say "write only what you can see." And through out the screenplay, there were things that you can not show on camera. If they can not show it on camera, then that is a waste of space. Those things are left up to the director.
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According to Mckee, is this screenplay comprised of more then one genre??
Weston - With the conversation between Fran and Bax, was there and over load of subtext, and shoud this have been omitted?
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